Stop Guessing. Start Knowing Why Your Message Isn’t Landing.
The Selling Story Audit: A high-impact review to find the gaps in your messaging and turn your story into a sales asset.
Is This You?
- You have a successful business, but you feel like you're shouting into a void.
- You suspect your marketing sounds just like everyone else (or a generic AI bot).
- You are getting traffic or interest, but people aren't "leaning in" or converting.
- You want an expert verdict on exactly where your message is failing before you spend another penny on marketing.
Is Your Message Getting Lost in the Noise?
We are living in the noisiest era in business history. Right now, everyone has access to the same AI tools, and the result is a ‘sea of sameness’ – polished websites and pitch decks that look perfect but say absolutely nothing.
If you feel invisible or suspect your message has become lost in the automated clutter, it’s usually because your story is missing its human spark. The Selling Story Audit is a diagnosis for businesses that are tired of being ignored. I evaluate your current story to see if it actually builds trust or if it’s just adding to the noise.
How the Audit Works
I deep-dive into the three most critical touchpoints where you either win or lose your audience:
Your Website Homepage
We look at that critical 5-second window where you prove your value.
Your ‘About’ Page
We review the one place where human trust is actually built.
One Key Sales Asset
Whether it's a pitch deck, LinkedIn profile, or sales one-pager, we look at your most important "high-stakes" document.
Three Pillars
How I Measure Your Message
I evaluate your business against the three pillars of a high-performing selling story. If any of these are missing, your marketing will struggle to convert.
- Clarity: Can a stranger understand what you do in 5 seconds, or are you losing them in the weeds?
- Distinction: Do you sound like a generic bot, or do you have a unique point of view that separates you?
- Persuasion: Is there a compelling psychological reason to act now, or is your value proposition too vague?
What You’ll Walk Away With
Real Insight, Not Just Feedback
You get two clear, actionable deliverables designed to stop the guesswork:
- The Message Gap Report: A concise PDF auditing your current messaging on Clarity, Distinction, and Persuasion. It identifies exactly where your message is falling flat.
- The 30-Minute Feedback Call: A 1-to-1 session to walk through the findings. I point out the specific disconnects so you can stop being "just another option" and start being the obvious choice.
Ready to invest in a message that drives growth?
This is a high-touch service with limited spots available each quarter.
Price: £495
The thing is, AI is great at doing the heavy lifting, but it’s not so good at the ‘human’ part. It can churn out content all day long, but it can’t find the specific reason a customer should trust you over anyone else. I help you use the speed of AI without the result sounding like a robot wrote it. My job is to find the human spark in your business and turn it into a narrative that actually works.
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